Some people claim that the government should provide free healthcare. Others believe that people should pay for private health care
Many people believe that tax money given by residents to the government annually should be invested for more practical purposes like free healthcare. Although free healthcare helps people feel more secure due to the financial support for a public health system, I agree that private healthcare provides better infrastructure and medical service quality.
On the one hand, residents who received basic medical coverage are not necessarily to worry about financial issues related to treatment costs. Their monthly budget, instead of saving for treatment costs, can be spent for more beneficial purposes. Opponents of such research argue that infrastructure and medical service quality of free healthcare is regularly not better than private healthcare. They believe that waiting time is often longer and will negatively affect patients' conditions.
On the other hand, the treatment costs of private healthcare often are expensive; therefore, many workers can not access it. Although the cost of public healthcare is cheap, many severe patients who need to stay at the hospital to have surgery will cost over one year salary of working people. However, supporters of private health systems argue that the medical service quality and infrastructure are better than free healthcare; therefore, they often attract people with economic stability.
In conclusion, despite free healthcare bringing more beneficiaries in terms of the economy, in my opinion, private healthcare, although more expensive, has better quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70484581498 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79986359637 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5947972967 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268182559414 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102851266035 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844072829528 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167805206712 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116439017107 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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