It is clear that clean and safe environment is an essential aspect of modern life for any nation. There are many people who think that domestic garbage is not being recycled enough as needed. In order to tackle this issue, environmentalists offer the method, where authorities should set up recycling laws to boost up the process. I agree with statement and I will support my view with further examples.
First of all, recycling regulation system needs to have the rules, as fines, to make sure citizens are not polluting neighborhoods, also public facilities by throwing the waste away. this is because punishment will encourage people to become more responsible for recycling improvement, and the amount of reproduced garbage will be controlled by management effectively. For example, depending on how much not recycled waste is left, the fines will be negotiated. Additionally,the annual recycling fee will be included to house association fee. if the government do not take care of pollution, it will increase considerably, which leads to serious problems as human self-destruction.
On the other hand, fine based regulation system can have visible negative impact on families' budget. this happens because there are already household payments , which citizens must pay monthly. Inspire of the effectiveness of the system, that might appear families unsatisfactory. Therefore, any legal requirement should consider homeowners' income and that kind of control needs to be discussed with public in order to avoid any misunderstandings.
In conclusion, introducing legislation make people to recycle more and keep the environment clean.
- Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 61
- Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53968253968 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22951266697 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2988482615 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227352970351 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716958864915 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688288769224 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139965016255 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774145527691 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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