Nowadays, traffic is the most important concern to metropolises. Overusing the transport system makes it vulnerable and causes some problems. Although rapidly increasing traffic issues, there are ways to tackle them.
First of all, urban sprawl and unplanned urban growth have a significant negative impact on transportation system. This is because migration to big cities from suburbs is growing faster than before, confusing people to commute in overcrowded cities. For example, in the city where I live, we do not have either locomotive networks or public buses, only the mode of transportation is private cars. While the number of car users is going up, the roads are getting congested worst. To solve this problem, city authorities should devise urbanization programs and insufficient number of roads need to be widened. As a result, urban growth will be controlled and new routes will keep the traffic flowing.
Secondly, another issue is substandard road conditions. For instance, in Astana, the capital of Kazakhstan, the quality of roads is below a satisfactory standard, so that the roads tend to get damaged, making difficult to use them for commuters. To tackle this problem, the government should allocate more budget on roadway constructions and also safe network of walking and cycling routes would be introduced to people in order to encourage public to use bikes instead of cars. As a result, city dwellers will use high standard roads, avoiding car accidents which most happen because of the quality of roads.
In conclusion, unless the authorities implement the method to solve these problems, traffic will be continued.
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 61
- Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se problems, traffic will be continued.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86235255169 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8680691152 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133587434209 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408062517477 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294556111156 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722146286633 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282968186197 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.