Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Due to the development of digital technology, it is now possible for viewers to see historical artifacts and artistic works on computers. Therefore, many people believe that the Internet can replace the need for museums and art exhibitions. In my opinion, I disagree with this opinion since museums or galleries are still of great importance in the modern world.
To begin with, when using a computer, users can access quickly different types of information about a work of art from the author to the documents with a click of the mouse. It also provides customers and has no opening time limits as well as unrestricted information data, which cannot be served by museums and art galleries due to incompetence. Take The Factory Contemporary Arts Center as an example, it only opens from Tuesday to Sunday from 10 am to 7 pm, which can be inconvenient for visitors who do not know this schedule. Therefore, that's is the reason why many prefer to have these items displayed by a computer.
Nonetheless, in fact, online-based information can never express adequate values of historic objects, while people can be given the opportunity to contemplate great artworks in actual museums and galleries because the information provided by them is more verified and reliable. Furthermore, museums and galleries support people to develop more a sense of respect towards the history and art of our country. Admiring real historical objects or artworks can help people learn more about their own country’s history and aesthetic field, thus making them cherish part of their national identity. Therefore, online museums and exhibitions cannot convey as much information to the viewers as real objects do.
In conclusion, although the role of the online presentation of historic places and artworks is undeniable, museums and exhibitions are significant in society because of their beneficial effects on our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23051948052 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93042638578 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5839081724 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335901348889 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103952953914 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646117081847 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179389178439 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704228998029 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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