Some people claim that study abroad has great benefits to a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, more and more parents choose to send their children to study in foreign countries, which raises the question of whether it is lucrative to their home country. Although I believe that there are numerous benefits to their country, I also think there are some downsides.
On the one hand, there are some advantages that students can gain from studying abroad. The first one is that pupils can get more opportunities to learn from prestigious institutions around the world. This not only broadens their horizons but also allows them to grow to their fullest potential. For example, an oversea student can contribute to developing the country in many aspects with their knowledge learned in college. Another benefit is that pupils can experience different cultures in an international environment. This will equip them with new perspectives and make them more open-minded as well. Therefore, most abroad graduates can get good jobs due to their activeness and innovative mindset.
On the other hand, it is not certain that studying abroad is entirely good. The first reason is that there is an alarming portion of students not returning home due to several factors. They may suppose that the government could not offer stable career prospects or the salary is not as high as that in other nations. Consequently, the country has to suffer a huge brain drain. Besides that, after a long time staying abroad, many people are out of touch with the current social scene in their home country. As a result, fresh graduates may find it difficult to blend in or get involved in the conversations at the workplace.
In conclusion, although the values that studying abroad brings to the country are undeniable, its drawbacks should be taken into consideration. It is vital that the government take some measures to attract students after their graduation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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...I also think there are some downsides. On the one hand, there are some advantag...
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...ir activeness and innovative mindset. On the other hand, it is not certain tha...
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...n the conversations at the workplace. In conclusion, although the values that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75424628096 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0672539809 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183201521642 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597980386556 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509073169399 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115805080044 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024493762773 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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