Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Studying overseas becomes one of the educational trends nowadays which some folks reveal that it will give positive impacts for the country where the student come from. I totally believe that there is a plethora of benefits which will be obtained by the country when their citizen takes study abroad.
First and foremost, there are many universities in the developed country which provide great facilities and expert lecturers because these will accommodate the student to improve their knowledge in particular field. For example, as medical students, they will be presented with the modern laboratory and medical expertise to support their theory and practice. As a result, the students will get outstanding experiences and are able to implement these in their home-country in the scope of improving health care quality.
Taking into more consideration, studying overseas will give a global connection. This is because throughout the learning process, the students will have the huge number of colleagues from over the world will open an opportunity to build the wider connectivity. To illustrate, the student who has graduated and established their own company can expand to others country because of the international connection which has been obtained before. Consequently, this global relationship will give positive impact in export and import activity to country’s economic level.
To sum up, in my point of view, there are many benefits which will be got by students and their home country automatically by studying overseas such as better educational facilities and the wider scope of connectivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, so, for example, in particular, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.484 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91012302145 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9125293611 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191284555261 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839042739943 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499753199798 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135143938313 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501651867391 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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