Some people claim that what people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. critics say that these countries should change their diet. what your opinion?
Unhealthy lifestyle on a way western people do their habitual daily food consumption is believed to become the main reason for the unsuccessful diet of their own. The argument to change this habit I assume should be implemented because of the high rates of calories and a lack of variety of nutrients contained in their food.
Admittedly, the majority type of western food has an enormous amount of calories such as burgers and pizzas which can exceed the normal need of calorie consumption (around 2200 kilocalorie) for an adult per day. However, the left-over calories will then transform into fats and followed by the increasing rate of cholesterol in the blood. Consequently, the probability of disease caused by later figures such as diabetes can occur higher. This argument is strengthened by the data collected in 2016 which revealed that an estimated 1.4 million people is death attributed to diabetes globally while 80,058 of them happens in the US.
Concerning this fact, there are two major ways to change this habit such as starting to pay more attention to the number of calories they are consumed and adding more variation on the food they eat to complete a larger range of nutrition. Managing the calories that people consumed will decrease the chance of having some dangerous diseases while increasing the number of nutrient types (vitamin, mineral, iron, zinc and so forth) will affect the healthiness of them. For instance, reading some information in the nutrition fact table which always exists behind the pack of the product will be very helpful to decide the total calories and the nutrition contained in the food.
In conclusion, western people have to start to focus on the calories they need and the nutrition they should fulfill to have a healthy lifestyle. Alternatively, adding more fruit and vegetable on their diet is also a great way to meet it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilocalorie' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilocalories'.
Suggestion: kilocalories
...need of calorie consumption around 2200 kilocalorie for an adult per day. However, the left...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03194888179 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68101569087 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55910543131 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6845696407 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.181818182 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14795372854 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597828479871 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628164400354 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110069460711 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756657011029 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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