Some people day that computer games are bad for children by all means, other believe that these games are contributing to children development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the steady rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in jungles to first step on moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remaind irreversable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that, are computer games; developing or spoiling children. Through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion at the end.
On one side, some people believe that playing computer games is advantageous. They strengthen their view point by claiming that it improves hand-eye coordination example children can coordinate between controlling console and having quick watch on screen for actions. In addition to this, it sharpens memory and concentration of children due to learning codes of some games and develope attentiveness to response quickly. One good illustration of this is it also develope the feeling of success as it motivate them to achieve their goals in life.
Contrary to this, there is group of people who believe that gaming console have sever effects on children lifestyle as well. Children who play voilent vedio games are more likely to have agressive thoughts. Not only this, it makes them socially isolated, children stick to games do not involve themselves in other activities such as; home work and sports. Moreover, it also puts bad impact on their health such as; weakening of eye sight, obesity, lethargic behaviour and mahe them irresposible.
Nevertheless, weighing both tbe opinions, i believe that there is no single conclusion. Still, i take this grand that an effective clap requires use of both hands. Therefore, it is important for overall developement of children untill used within the limits so that it may not affect their facets of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2406779661 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84276449401 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650847457627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9028368098 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270245900307 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824610612489 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715219962331 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148243699651 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563598080329 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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