Some people the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at schools is more influential.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. HOMEWORK - KHANH - JUNE 19
It is often the the case that everyone must to passing pass the life stages before being an aldult. On the other hand On the one hand, Some opinion suggest that come across life as a kid has more effected effects than the future experience, other and I opine that the life time as a teenager is the major reason for people to grow up.
There are many reasons for facing life as a child be more affected to there adult life. to started, it is obviously that kid emotional experesstions depend on there parent treatment ways,as a kid they used to imitating there parent this is important because the way there parent treated them is the way they treated the other.Also kid just like a blank paper, every of your small action they will match exactly into there memories,so this time is the easiest way to shape them properly.Not only that, in this stage they are in a realization mode so they can easy imitated the bad and negative crime which bring lost of impact on there long-lasting personality.
Speaking of which, I deem that teenager life times is more serious. The first factor is that in teenager life they a rebellious period in there side, this period will affect most of the teenager , this situation is the hardest side for there life to faced with,at this time there awareness increase which mean they think a lot and if they found something reasonable they will officially do it,which mean if the negative or crime word make them believe or interested they will joined .There are many case of teenager being rapped and get cheated big amount of money by words and reasons.
In summary, althouge there is many opinion about which stages to concentrated there kid.I think the most effected and clearer is the way other people treated them and there condition which they are living ,contend the method there parent teached .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, i think, in summary, speaking of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69349845201 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34516044543 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.926218817 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.571428571 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1428571429 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123909410637 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807209648375 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454854723136 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885391504128 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444516109072 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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