Topic: Some people the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at schools is more influential.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why babyhood can predict how an adult's temperament would be. To begin with, it is undeniable that this phase is when cognitive and affective processes, such as the formation of emotional expressions and first speech, are in their infancy. As a result, if newborns acquire suitable techniques from their parents to form their unique qualities, this will help them in the long term. Furthermore, bantlings begin to engage with the outside environment primarily at this time, mimicking humans around them. As a result, depending on who they interact with, individuals develop both negative and positive personas.
Others and I, on the other hand, are certain that early experiences have a significant role in shaping people's future lives. The first reason is that younglings are then developed enough to be completely conscious of their actions. Once trained, they can, for example, detect wrongdoing and prevent illegal activities. As a result, the percentage of mistakes committed by teens is smaller than that of bantustans. The second reason is that during this flowering era, teenagers are intellectually and emotionally stable enough to acquire good social and psychological characteristics including as defining personal objectives, making major decisions, and having close relationships. This stage is often referred as as a milestone laying a business.
In conclusion, while it is undeniably true that humans' early years are critical to their subsequent development, I would argue that adolescent experiences, along with schooling, should be prioritized because this is the time when a person's social, cognitive, and affective functions can be sharpened, influencing the rest of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...reasons why babyhood can predict how an adults temperament would be. To begin with, it...
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Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...tionships. This stage is often referred as as a milestone laying a business. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51865671642 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04626417764 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7099062848 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103866767126 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349308903122 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050284906145 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683901614142 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252861741518 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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