It is often said that children benefit from living in the dormitory while studying. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and argument can be made against the idea. The essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support studying at the boarding school cite the various benefits that the dormitory can bring to a pupil. These range from discipline, to interacting with their peers and independent from parents. For example, cleaning the room and washing clothes contribute to self-support and discipline, which adds greatly to a child's experience, preparing him to the adulthood. Another argument is the emotional and physical support that pupils receive from their friends, meaning that the mate is able to give him/her a listening ear and a helping hand.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that not all children get used to livimg in the dormitory without seeing their parents for a long while. Examples can be seen in shy children, who are not able to make friends with others and often feel alone. Moreover, many children do not always study under supervisio resulting in law academic achievement and bullying. Finally, it must be said that not all pupils actually want to lie elsewhere and they intend to relax after school, going to the cinema or visiting different department stores.
Overall, it seems advisable that studying at the boarding school might be an excellent choice for pupils, which enables them to overcome shyness and gain ability of discipline, rather than deteriorate their behaviour and academic achievement.
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusio 78
- Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion. 78
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusio 73
- In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent? 84
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, moreover, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18007662835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71247050121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3870765822 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172898284251 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549071850555 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469217469623 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997254561134 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368574569275 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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