Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Some individuals believe that the entertainment makers such as movie actors, pop stars or popular sports player were overpaid in term of money. I moderately disagree with the statement above. The entertainers were paid properly to their performances.
In the entertainment industry, each individual performer takes time to shine and become popular. In order to get paid in a huge rate of salary, they need to produce the outstanding acting skills to the eyes of producer and audience. Each film taking requires long period of time to be created emotionally. For instance, the Thai film call Pi Mak Phra Kanhong took over a year for the filming procedure. Two of the most legendary stars were playing roles of main characters. From their interviews, they said “we had been filming this for over a year and we did not get enough time to sleep well at night since most of the films were taken after the sun set.
With full energy giving enthusiastically to the job, the entertainers should be paid highly as well as another mental career, teachers.
The duties of teachers are not only to give their knowledge to the beloved students, but to foster good manners to each individual which require physical and mental strength. In Thailand, the educational staffs are underrated and underpaid compared to the jobs they have to do. To illustrate, a teacher from Princess Chulabhorn High School said “we as the teachers have to behalf well in school to be a role model for students and also must be prepared for answering questions from all students at all time.”
From the reasons mentioned above, I disagree on this issue that the entertainers are paid too much money since their jobs require outstanding skills and huge period of working overtime. In my aspect, teacher is another occupation which should receive high salary because of the requirement of being good at teaching and being a role model for the youth. Furthermore, teaching job is with loads of works which are not just to educate the pupils in school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...h as movie actors, pop stars or popular sports player were overpaid in term of money. ...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...udience. Each film taking requires long period of time to be created emotionally. For instance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00877192982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73302358946 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.7169375809 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25922557491 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811262867341 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563486945416 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159532487909 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067278764062 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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