Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is the most important part of life, it also comes with responsibilities. Nevertheless, this has always been a topic of debate that if people should get married after the age of 21. I will examine all the possible dimensions of this topic with examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
The first reason that states that why people should get married after 21 is: maturity. Because maturity comes with the age and experience of life, an individual who is under 21 cannot make important decisions with maturity which will affect their partner as well as their marriage. Moreover, financial stability is another important aspect in marriage, as after marriage two individuals will commence their new life which requires money. Therefore, if both the individuals get married before getting financially stable, it will result in monetary issues and eventually disrupts the marriage. For instance, a recent survey by “The Tribune” in India states that 35% of the divorce were the result of marriage before the age of 21.
On the contrary, there are people who believe that marriage should not be limited by the specific age. As a the foundation of a relationship is love and love cannot be controlled by age, therefore people should be allowed even to get married before 21. Furthermore, marrying before 21 will allow couples to spend time together and grow with each other, because they will learn about each other, which will help strengthen their bond. Hence, it makes the marriage stronger.
In conclusion, there has been number of answers to this question. However, the drawbacks of getting married before 21 outweighs the merits. Therefore, I firmly believe that the legal age to get married should be 21, since marriage is a relationship that comes with responsibilities and it requires balance that comes with maturity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10491803279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753649456 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7042705637 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202327345519 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806961752161 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780532142794 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140077344102 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392086323674 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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