Whether local news is crucial or international news? It is believed by a certain section of society that local news are more important as compared to the international information; however I support others who believe that international news are more beneficial.
Some believe that local news are more advantages as it is the best way to acquire common and local information where people is living. Owing to the fact that a detailed description is given in the local newspapers, all the biggest and smallest news are cleared written in the local news channels and newspapers. Besides this, people become more informational about their current areas where they are living, and know deeply about local issues. To cite an example, a survey was conducted by The Tribune newspaper, in India, in year 2019 revealed that 75% people were reading local news most of the time and write them about local issues mostly. Additionally, younger generation become more aware about their country’s progress and failure in terms of economy, laws, trends, and many more, for their better development.
Nevertheless, international news is playing out a crucial role in the global knowledge. Since, today every news is spreading like fire in all over the world, entire world become a small global village. Therefore to survive in this fast moving life, it is necessary to be abreast of all the news. Not only it is helping to know about serious matters in the world, but also it is giving information about latest fashion, sports, entertainment and so on. Furthermore, youngsters can get information more easily which will later lend a helping hand to survive in multinational companies as well as other culture. For instance, had my friend, Rosy, never read international articles in newspapers, she could not have got the senior manager post in London.
To conclude, people differ in their opinions, as to gain knowledge about their own country, some believe that local news are more beneficial, and others favour reading international news due to all over world information.
- Recent research has shown that within the Europian Union the largest differences between the earnings of men and women exists in the UK Many equal rights compaigners believe that immediate actions should be taken to close the gender gap To what extent do 84
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is impossible to help all people in the world so governments should only focus on people in their own countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- in today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers what can arts tell us about life that science and technology can not 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, in India, in year 2019 revealed that 75% people were reading local news most ...
^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...re world become a small global village. Therefore to survive in this fast moving life, it...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...orld, but also it is giving information about latest fashion, sports, entertainment and so o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16071428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84167439702 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0872507551 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313246110812 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118889033128 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788003745109 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221591388272 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624933184518 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.