At this present era, this is hardly possible to find a person who does not seek for news. Though all the news media cover both national and international events, people are devided into two separate groups prefering either locacl news or global news. In this essay, both the views will be discussed, followed by my opinion.
Individuals who are fond of local news are able to develop situational awareness as well as they can feed their curiocity for known places fast. Regarding the awareness, the news collectors come to know about the events. After going through the news, the reader can predict the impact of such news and its capability to affect his life. Local radio channel, for instance, usually broadcasts update on traffic jam that helps the passengers decide the right way to reach destination. Then again, everyone has the curiocity to know about known places. As a result, local news is related to known places, so the curiocity for known places is always fulfilled.
Apart from local news, there are a group of people, preferring global news over all othes. These men go through the details of international events and try to forecast the impact on home country. For example, stock market investors withdrew their funds after getting notified about the collapse of global capital markets because of the on-going pandemic. Furthermore, some of us are fond of knowing foreign countries. Their thrist for knowledge and adventure make them the group of people collecting foreign news.
In my opinion, a mix priority in between local news and international news can provide anyone with maximum level of benefits. In this way, news audience can have better understanding of all the events and can better forecast the outcomes.
To conclude, although recepients have unique preferences on one over another, regional news and global news serve the same purpose, to spread the information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
... Apart from local news, there are a group of people, preferring global news over ...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...f global capital markets because of the on-going pandemic. Furthermore, some of us are f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12179487179 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58367529708 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2668372935 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265658389105 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877956412605 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616075101021 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15294624639 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494326627997 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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