Some people prefer to gain knowledge from their experience. others prefer to gain knowledge from books .Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
In education field, we have many sources to get knowledge from. The best two ways to get knowledge are gaining by experiencing or by reading books. But which way is the best choice to gain information. I will explain both opinions as follows.
first of all, gaining information by experiencing is the first way that ancient humans use it to gain knowledge. For example, people discovered a lot of discoveries such as fire, cultivation, electricity and fishing by practicing and investigating them. In addition, this way is the best for people who love to amuse their life, because this way is practical and exciting. Meanwhile, it is the best way to memorize and keep information in an inerasable memory as the scientists said. Despite all these virtues, this way has many defects such as wasting time and unexpected results.
On the other hand, gaining information by reading books is the best way for people who prefer to read before work than to work without any experience. this way also has many features such as boiling the time down, organizing ideas and getting benefits of other people's experience. For instance, you can read books about astronomy, and gain information from other astronomers then complete their observation instead of starting your own observation and investigate some things that had already been investigated. Hence, you will not sophisticate the field you take.
in brief, from my perspective, attaining information needs to variegate your ways of studying, then get as much of information as possible from any source after that, collect your whole information to make sufficient idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17803030303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92314068977 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2166454397 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268861046716 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861442500232 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649483276287 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161062862478 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783349644653 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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