Some people prefer to have one role model. While others prefer to have more than one.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In modern times, having a role has become increasingly important. Some people think that having one role model is more convenient. While others believe that having more than one role model make you gain many good habits from all your role models. in this essay I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people should have one role model. Perhaps the main reason is because if you have one role model you can follow all his or her life easily. Furthermore, you can imitate all his or her good habits and the good things that he or she is doing. For example, the latest statistics indicate that 35 percent of people follow one role model.
On the other hand, there are those who say that having more than one role model make you gain a lot of experiences in life. Perhaps the main reason why people in favour of this idea is because having many role models make you able to take the good habits from everyone and ignore the bad ones. Moreover, role models' experiences should educate people how they act rationally when they are in a difficult situation. In addition, following many role models motivate you to be hard working and a successful person
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of point views, I believe that having more than one role model let you gaining good things and avoid bad things from every one
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64143426295 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23209993564 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517928286853 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2543857808 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412014774754 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190594832214 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118316581679 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295501392118 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112260022811 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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