Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The technological advancement of the world has created some exclusive debates. Whether to live in a large town or in the suburbs is one of them. I favour to live in a downtown as city-life offers numerous job opportunities as well as more advanced medical supports than the rural areas.
To commence with, the affluent cities has a pivotal impact on the economic growth of a country. Since the most of the industries are situated around these cities, they exhibit a major range of job vacancies compared to suburbs. Moreover, The urban environment demonstrates a competitive nature so that the salaries are quite handsome there. All these benefits allow us to lead a comfortable and luxurious life in downtown than in uptown. To cite an example, an article in "Daily buggle" indicates that " The jobs in big cities provide about 45% more salaries compared to rural areas."
On the other hand, the medical amenities in large towns are more technologically advanced than small towns. Futhermore, they offer various facilities such as one call ambulance, Home doctor services, and so on. Specially, the hospital in these areas has more equipments to detect and distinct diseases which is a big help. For instanct, research by "Khulna University" reflects that " about 50% of people living in rural areas are suffering from basic health issues."
In a nutshell, the life standards in a big city are far more superior than in a small town. Even though life in the outskirts of the urban areas may offer sound climate and peace, these areas lacks work opportunities and vital medical amenities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...he life standards in a big city are far more superior than in a small town. Even though life in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14232209738 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96789481162 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1482657599 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130307059267 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046529924268 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514588509935 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889870551102 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521014278265 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.