Some people prefer to participate in social service avtivities with a group, while others would rather particiapte alone.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People work on social projects based on their ideologies, situations and other reasons and their ultimate goal is to help the ones who truly deserve help. The basic idea of participating in social projects is to bring about social change that will benefit an individual, or communities and people prefer to carry out this either in a group or alone.
Some people believe that social programs groups are profit-oriented for their cause than a social cause. Once they make a profit in their group and they will either mask their identities and disappear or start another social group with a different concept of money-making by showcasing that their new group as some social project group. These types of groups held responsible for people to lose their faith in social project groups and they might end up working alone for the social cause. Other than these kinds of groups, multiple social groups are purely non-profitable organizations and their main motto is to bring about change in the lives of the needy creatures, the one who truly deserves the help. We can see that there are multiple NGO's are serving as a platform for social service works.
People proved that working alone on social cause is also an effective way to bring a change in communities. We can list multiple reasons why people prefer working alone than in a group? Some individuals have trust issues on groups already working on the same social cause they wanted to participate in. One more reason is that they find it difficult to consider themselves working in a group or they find it easy to work alone rather than participate as part of the team or they find it difficult to allocate some time to actively participate in the teamwork. Considering these facts some people feel it is better for them to work alone.
To conclude, it is important that people are actively participating in social service activities and I personally appreciate the help and suggest everyone who is interested in helping the community as a team should be careful before joining that team.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to help'
Suggestion: to help
...l is to help the ones who truly deserve help. The basic idea of participating in soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90229885057 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62618368206 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9264555249 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251159972791 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108769199153 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370887384938 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156387885149 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401798297927 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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