Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are arguments that individuals should be refrained from doing new things and must stick to traditional approaches. However, some people are convinced that individuals need to venture into some noble experiences in life. In my opinion, I would argue that alternations in some activities and practices are essential to achieving personal fulfilment and success.
On the one hand, it is sure for say that some people may become comfortable with the routine practices in life, which they are more accustomed. In addition, doing the same things enables people to have more time and require less effort to complete their tasks or jobs as they are already more cognizant about the activities that they habitually perform. Take some married women as an example, some women fear the changes, and knowledge improvement after getting married and delivering babies. They desire to stabilise and have more time to take care of their children and small family.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the changes offer favorable conditions for the improvement and development of people. Furthermore, they bring us amazing journeys of discovery and challenges. If people overcome challenges, they can achieve the new horizons in their lives. Besides that, any success often requests the time and effort, so accepting the changes is a stepping stone to gain the achievement. For instance, many women keep the time for studying, enhancing knowledges, undertaking new jobs to fulfill themselves. As a result, some of them can become famous politicians, scientists, doctors, or gain success in various fields.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against the changes, but I believe that the change plays a critical role to the fulfilment and development of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34275618375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85552598362 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8290284747 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15505246395 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499055209608 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361418208482 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914284165516 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416561896911 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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