Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Other, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that people shun the idealogy of change and welcome the idea to engage in the same things, all their lives. Nonetheless, others opine that change is always a positive step and development to engage in. In my opinion, although change can lead to the fear of the unknown, overall, change can be bring about positive improvements in the life of an individual.
There are many reasons why peope seek change, one of reasons is that change can lead to positive developments in a persons life. This means that most people opt for change perhaps because they perceive the signs of negative developments in their lives or want to make a situaution better. Thus, when change happens, this can bring happiness and satisfaction to the life of sn individual. For example, the government of Norway accepted and implemented a reports recommendation to increase the number of police officers on the streets, as a result, this year, Norway recorded the lowest level of crime in its history.
However, there are reasons why people do not like the idea of change. One of such is that change in itself can bring about the fear of the unknown. In other words, most people are afraid and skeptical about the results of what change might bring, which in most cases they believe to be a negative result, so they prefer to keep to what they have always know. Further more, the anticipation of change can cause fear and anxiety, this can invariably have negative effects on a persons life, such as psychological problems.
In conclusion, while change lead to the fear of the unknown, the idea of change is believed to lead to positive improvements and developments in an individual's life. In my opinion, change is a crucial part of life and can only lead to positive developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80781758958 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70274308995 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472312703583 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6421572552 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196998647515 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844586984691 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396142170519 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137196337026 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425327284502 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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