Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, people consider allocating a lifetime to repeat things, and others are keen on changes because of their goodness. However, it is believed repetitive ways are related to risk management, and the rest is about self-exploration.
It is argued that doing similar manners rather than changing those is to avoid dangers in order to reach goals effortlessly. That is to say, when individuals have found better problem-solving, they have measured how to achieve their ambitions easily, and originating a current way is risky due to facing unpredictable conditions. For instance, Ahmad Yani, a successful denarian businessman in Indonesia said that making dream come true is to follow the other successors because discovering a new formula will probably waste time, having a possibility to meet a failure. Therefore, persons possess a tendency to do the same things and hinder the changes because those are simple by merely implementing routines without facing any risk.
However, it is true that changes will bring someone to explore their selves to generate new knowledge. This is because if people alter their habits positively, they will broaden their horizons on how to answer puzzling problems which are not experienced prior, coping with a survival condition. For example, youngsters creating a chance to engage in outdoor activities may bear in mind psychologically that can deal with a severe situation because of altering lifestyle which more alert to danger around them. So that, changes are frequently good for everyone to adapt to bad situational events, being a current thing to address harm.
In conclusion, it is a firm belief that not only sometimes changes are merit and demerit due to simplicity to tackle problematic matters and dealing to survive, respectively. Where possible, people should not outweigh whether transforming their life or not, based on the situation they experiencing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01199638483 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2049362503 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184190098473 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673710545839 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503756060612 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105219648688 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016721999537 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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