Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The merits and demerits of change are justified across diverse dimensions in accordance with people’s attitude towards it. Despite the fact that some hold conservative views about change on the safety grounds, I believe that adaptation is vital to some extent.
For one thing, it is true that changing is not merely a positive trend in some situations. People who avoid stepping out of their safety zone consider various factors that may affect their rights or the status of stability. Yet, it is the mental determination that gears their thinking towards different potential scenarios in which changes could bring about negative consequences and in turn instill in them a sense of fear. For instance, it is reasonable for an executive to not adopt any modern business strategies, a concept of which his understanding is incapable to combine into practice given the majority of enterprises have succeeded by using the similar patterns. In this context, the director has placed the sake of his company in higher esteem, taking into account risks that may occur during the adaptation which affect their operation.
For another, I fervently believe that the benefits of change overshadow its disadvantages for some reasons. Admittedly, since the dawn of mankind, changes from the primitive agriculture methods to the evolution of working tools has played a crucial role to the progress of homosapien society and lays a solid foundation to further cutting edge devices these days. Furthermore, the exploration of researchers spreaded out globally has enlightened and broadened our horizon to the many continents, contributing largely to the connection of isolated regions with other parts of the world and strengthening the bonds between humanity. Both of which require an open mindset and visionary pioneers to be feasible. In regards to the case in which globalization is influential in a larger context, it offers the civilians opportunities to exchange and promote acculturation, facilitating foreign business activities, and the only beneficiaries are those who accept risks to change.
To conclude, there are conflicting sentiments about whether or not to change. Generally, the concept of which should be taken into thorough consideration when the evident benefits it brings about must not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, for instance, for one thing, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4432132964 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01046483706 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612188365651 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2594091593 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.357142857 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168705417184 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555465930545 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049786278661 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931442568409 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603268595336 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.