Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The continuous emergence of the rapid crime volume requires immediate intervention from the law enforcement and technology applications are regarded as an effective measure to diminish criminality. Personally, I completely agree that innovation could contribute tremendously to crime prevention in general.
On the one hand, there are critics on the basis that criminality is the result of hereditary traits or environmental factors which is inevitable and the statistics will insist at a certain degree. In terms of those whose parents have committed heinous crimes in the past or whose characteristics are often aggressive, there is a likelihood that they could inherit partially an individuality of impulse or violence. Hence, as the preconception and cognition system of children in formative years do not allow them to draw a clear distinction of good and bad while growing in such conditions, they are more inclined to blindly duplicate the wrongdoings of the adults. As a result, there will be an increasing number of criminals in turn.
On the other hand, I believe that the aforementioned issue could be surmounted as technology is able to outperform the conventional crime prevention methods with applications in a larger context. For one, the installation of camera systems in several countries has emphasized its efficiency when penetrating every single corner of the streets. The execution of this setting has delivered tangible results given the incidence of crime is often occurred under squalid conditions or even in the residential areas. Drugs dealers, for instance, have been caught with a massive number of cases under the supervision of undercover cameras. Furthermore, with cutting-edge gadgets, federal agencies are now available to track suspects movement of the offenders in tandem with minimize the crime volume, which will support the investigation substantially.
To conclude, innovation could facilitate law enforcement in the endeavor to reduce the proportion of crime. Yet, governments should adopt technology in accordance with the privacy of citizens for the sake of the society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, so, while, for instance, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5490797546 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23870748383 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7179423617 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178592731297 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597344812992 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469116257949 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108112342855 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397451702616 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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