Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People have their own view about changes in their life. Some individuals give credence to the fact that spending almost time of their life to do the same things day by day, although several changes are good for their being. Personnaly, I firmly believe that it is best to have some changes in order to improve quality of life.
In the one hand, doing the same things is not bad in several cases. In reality, instead of making some changes, they have a tendency to go behind things that they feel good. Sometimes, good things are no need to change. An employee, in fact, applies for a job and he finds that this work is suitable for him, thus this will be his long-term job. It is important to realise which is fit to our life and demands, and then we can have the best decision for us.
In the other hand, the changes seem to be new opportunities. Making new changes is equivalent to having more chances for upcoming time. As evidence, changing learning style is changing student's life. When a student becomes harder than before, he will fortunately receive a scholarship from his establishment. This scholarship will turn a new page for his future, such as having more potential opportunities in finding jobs in future career.
Honestly, all turn-arounds will have an enormous impact on their own life. Hence, people should consider carefully before deciding to change somthing or remain it.
To sum up, individuals should accord to their current situation before having new changes. The most important thing is to realise the suitable method for their own life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, honestly, if, so, then, thus, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81549815498 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54547293633 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7045300581 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7647058824 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24695457613 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891301309843 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691342013154 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142505788051 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754838077867 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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