Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else, others are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Reaching a balance between work and recreation plays a vital role in modern life. Many believe that their work is everything. On the flip side, others are more enthusiastic about their interests. The present essay seeks to discuss the advantages of being a workaholic are outweighing its disadvantages.
It is often suggested that being a workaholic is beneficial for two main reasons. For one thing, it is undeniable to admit that when people have their ideal job, they may dedicate all their time and ability for it. It is not necessarily a bad thing. For example, my English teacher told me once that considered himself the luckiest man on earth when he walked into class and taught us. Another thing is that nowadays we live in an active and working society and all of us have many dreams that remain untouchable unless with hardship. As an illustration, working hard is a socially acceptable way to reach to the fruitful life they want. Although much of the workaholic in our everyday lives has only positive effects, some uses raise controversial issues and questions. In the first place, many businessmen have indulged themselves in the money-making process much more than anything else, even slipping, which entails hundreds of disorders. In Japan, many big companies have rooms for sleeping, and employers must use them. In the second place, workaholics often experience numerous physical and mental illnesses after a while because they do not eat and rest properly, and they are in a permanent state of stress. As things stand right now, no doubt, workaholics earn more and live in better living conditions consistently, but this lifestyle they choose entails too many damages including anxiety, depression, and isolation.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of being a workaholic, I personally believe that its upside is significantly more crucial than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two primary arguments. Firstly, Doctor Benet, the enchanted economist believes that we need today is more workaholics if we want to win our economy battle with the east. despite damages that workaholics take, but they are an essential part for boost-up the national economy. Secondly, the latest figures released by the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) reflect that about 95 percent of citizens who work more than 8 hours per day have no criminal records at any level. In other words, there is a proverb that goes like this: An idle mind is the devil's workshop.
Based on the above, it can be stated that being the workaholic is meritorious. Nevertheless, the question is: Can work too much improve the health and happiness of human beings in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, workaholics continue to influence every aspect of our national economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Despite
...o win our economy battle with the east. despite damages that workaholics take, but they...
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Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (FBI) must be used with a third-person verb: 'reflects'.
Suggestion: reflects
...the Federal Bureau of Investigation FBI reflect that about 95 percent of citizens who w...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devils'' or 'devil's'?
Suggestion: devils'; devil's
...hat goes like this: An idle mind is the devils workshop. Based on the above, it can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, another thing, for example, in general, no doubt, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07956989247 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79873780249 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7412350666 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29166666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165025999805 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469602761978 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547556432817 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103404032679 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684449257138 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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