Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertising industry has grown so widely in this age, that it has huge on people’s buying. But there are some people also who ignore advertise as it is so common now a days. We will discuss on both view on essay. But in my opinion, it plays positive role on persuading us to buy things.
It is true that, advertising has positive influence on buying thing that it provides details about the things we are purchasing. By the information provided, make us rational customers. For example, by the advertisement we can know about the materials used on it, process of manufacturing, price comparison, brand etc. Furthermore, it gives us choice among the different products. You can find same thing of different company, which give you confusion on which product is good. Advertise helps to make clear about this. Also, it can save time of consumers by providing information, by sitting at home, they can choose their product, no need to visit store to store.
On other hand, people are avoiding advertisement that they are so common. One reason is hectic life, that they see same advertisement everywhere like, TV, online, on road and they start ignoring due to the lack of creativity. Almost, all advertise use celebrity who have huge fan following and always show the positive side only. They exaggerate the product features and make people stereotype to buy the product to look alike as their celebrity. People are more rational now that they ignore the advertisement which is over simplified.
To conclude, even advertising is becoming so common that people are ignoring it but also fact is that it is very successful to persuade the people for buying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79156665472 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4969544162 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1176470588 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364539054364 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119651215206 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797023317946 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242084898262 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838436409676 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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