Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is argued by some that advertising plays a crucial role at convincing us to purchase products, while there are others who believe we have started ignoring advertising since it has become very typical. In my opinion, I believe that depending on the type of advertising, either buying a product willingly based on it or ignoring the advertisement can take place.
On the one hand, many thinks that at persuading consumers to buy products, advertisement is very prosperous. this is mainly because a deciding factor towards promoting products in an effective way is to keeping pace with changing consumer demands. this cannot be achieved unless there is specialists to identify these demands. Thanks to the new academic majors related to advertising such as consumer behavior, advertising sales and advertising research, it is now possible to train specialized staff for promoting products.
On the other hand, advertising are not attractive to consumers anymore, according to some. With consumers being overloaded with brands constantly shouting at them “buy now”, “pick me”, “new and improved” via email, SMS and other common ways with no updates, it is obvious that these advertisements do not draw attention as before. A commercial break, for instance, once was broadcast on television which was an attention-grabbing one to me. After a while, I got so bored of the ad that I could not help changing the channel when it was aired.
Finally, I believe that whether advertising being thriving or not being attention-grabbing anymore, depends on the type of the advertisement. Should the advertising agencies know their target audience’s latent needs and use up-to-date methods to promote their products, these audience will be swayed by the advertisement even if it is an unreal need. The specialists can recognize the audience’s demands to advert a promotion which stick in their head. these well-trained workforces can use up-to-date popular methods and mediums such as online adverts in social networks, celebrity endorsements and even word of mouth advertising to promote a product which grab audience’s attention and stick in their head.
In conclusion, I believe that according to the type of advertisement, we could buy a product avidly or we disregard it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35734072022 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19609734703 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559556786704 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7808261847 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235494759485 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818120207283 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586325272089 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131221527297 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430147230112 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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