Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
These days, the advertisements are getting overwhelmingly popular among different manufacturers around the world. While some people opine that it increases the sales of products by successfully convincing the consumers, others claim that it has lost its significance due to getting very common. This essay will discuss that why despite the potential of adverts to increase sales in certain circumstances, still among many societies it lost its importance and became irritating.
To begin with, the promotions play an important role to increase the sales of products for different companies. Although it can’t force the consumers to buy a particular product, still it plays its part to familiarize the society with the new products of a company. For instance, Apple and Samsung use the adverts to make the society aware of the new launched products. In addition, as it can’t convince people to buy product, but it plays a bigger role to recommend the consumers the product in which he or she is interested in. For example, a friend of mine was searching for a best mobile brand to buy and then he bought a techno mobile after watching the advert of it on the television. Hence, adverts hold the power to increase the sales of a company.
Despite the fact that promotions can boost the company sales by recommending and familiarizing the society with the new products, still the increasing trend of adverts became irritating. These days, many people installed the ads blocker apps in their browsers or mobile phone so that it can block the occurrence of the ads that disturbs them. Moreover, most of the people find it difficult to watch their favorite TV shows or news on the TV due to the overwhelming increase in media advertisements. For example, my uncle switch offs the TV during the advertisements while watching news or TV shows. Hence, the increase of advertisements made it daunting for people to watch the content on internet or TV and hence it lost its focus.
In conclusion, companies, these days rely on adverts for increasing their sales. This essay discussed that why adverts are capable of recommending and familiarizing instead of forcing the public to buy things but why its increasing trend reduced its importance. In my opinion, people will focus on advertisements of things in which he/she is interested in to buy, overall, it became troublesome these days to watch too much ads due to which it lost its significance and became useless In certain societies.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ple, a friend of mine was searching for a best mobile brand to buy and then he bo...
^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ads'' or 'ad's'?
Suggestion: ads'; ad's
.... These days, many people installed the ads blocker apps in their browsers or mobil...
^^^
Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ame troublesome these days to watch too much ads due to which it lost its significan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03631961259 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9569131779 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9989776541 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14358191473 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498072014876 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450528130454 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100751264215 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388490952927 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ple, a friend of mine was searching for a best mobile brand to buy and then he bo...
^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ads'' or 'ad's'?
Suggestion: ads'; ad's
.... These days, many people installed the ads blocker apps in their browsers or mobil...
^^^
Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ame troublesome these days to watch too much ads due to which it lost its significan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03631961259 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9569131779 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9989776541 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14358191473 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498072014876 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450528130454 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100751264215 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388490952927 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.