Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Advertisement industry has grown drastically and has influence on many people towards buying things, while others argue that adverts has become very common that rarely anyone pay attention to it. In this essay I will discuss both the views, however, in my opinion, advertisement have major influenced people to buy things.
There are many types of advertising today. For example, products for children are fun and engaging. That is why kids want to shop in stores for what they see on the internet and on TV. Because the more colorful and attractive the advertisemeat, the more the demand for the product will increase.
Of course, if you want to start a business, we need advertising to implement it, which will help it spread to the public in a short time. Nowadays, advertising on posters is not the same as before, and advertising services on the internet are very development. Groups and channels on the internet have been adversting people telling them about their businesses. The ability to convince the customer when selling the seller's product is necessarry. Because if the seller can justify the customer's trust, he will buy from the same seller's store next time as well. The increase in customers also depends on the vendor.
In conclusion, although it might be a pain those who are not willing to buy the product, adverts being the best method of promoting products and services, it does influence people in buying the products. Advancement in the advertisement are done at a very good pace and will continue to develop in coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94636015326 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7364906302 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7005001536 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218083730155 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687881040084 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069035035697 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13112467449 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796264111376 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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