some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means . others believe that these games are contributing to children's development. diacuss both views
with the rise in modernisation , man has transformed his life tremendously.he has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take the first step on the moon . nevertheless,there are aome issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever . for instance , the given topic asserts that are the computer games bad for children or do they contribute to children's development . through this essay , i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through the examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
on one side, there is a group of people who believe that computer games are bad for children. kids activities have been shifted from outdoor to rooms specifically to screens . now they are engrossed in playing video games .They strengthen their viewpoint by claiming that the video games deteriorate the physical health of a child. prolonged playing of video games not only worsens the eyesight of a person but also causes obesity as a result of no involvement in physical activities and games . to bolster my perspective i would like to say that a recent survey has been conducted by britain's government in which it is clearly stated that 70% students are going obese due to the lack of outdoor games.in addition to this, video games have been proved a strong distractor which distracts the children from homeworks and studies. apart from this, some children come out to be more agressive by playing various games like gta vice city, blue whale etc.
contrary to this, there are some other people who believe that video games are necessary for children's development . to make this arguement more convincing , they claim that video games are important for children as the games enhance the intellectual skills of the children , the video games strongly inculcate the concentration power of a child which further improves his preception power and observation skills. furthermore, the most substantial advantage of video games lies in improving the hand eye cordination. The child becomes multifaceted and multitasker . The child becomes mature enough to categorize and prioritize the things. moreover, the attention giving capability of a child reaches the peak level. The video games sharpens the memory of a child and he learns to follow the instructions.for instance, he reads the instructions carefully before starting the game and learns to follow the same.they claim that a questionnaire was conducted by indian government in 2017 and 75% of children were found to inculcate their intellectual skills with help of playing video games .
nevertheless, weighing both the options , i believe that there is no single opinion but still i take this ground that an effective clap requires use of both the hands and i pen down saying that video games ahould be played by children but it is the foremost responsibility of parents to keep a check on the paying time period .The video games should be played by children but for a limited time. they should be equally involved in physical activities as well as outdoor games do that they can b fit physically as qell as psychologically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 507.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08678500986 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9314720896 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510848126233 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 788.4 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.479252407 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.736842105 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6842105263 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 55.0 5.01903807615 1096% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335593134611 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113302813576 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125463346304 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211956697985 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346906193794 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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