Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sidesand give your opinion.
Many people have an opinion that, poverty has been reduced due to the progression of economic status. Whereas, it is argued by some that, since economic development has led to pollution, it should be mitigated. This essay will discuss both the perspectives. In my opinion, pollution should be prevented, but it does not means that economic growth should be stopped.
On the one hand, poverty has been vanished from many countries because of the positive growth in the economy. To cite an example, India was a developing country, many Indians was under the poverty line. Since after the industrialization, the standard of living in India has increased to a greater extent. Although the unemployment rate was high in many countries, with the development of both agricultural and industrial sectors has created plenty of jobs for the citizens and thus it provided basic amenities to all like food, shelter and health care to everyone. In addition, increasing economic condition will also improve the infrastructural facilities, which will attract more visitors as a part of tourism. Therefore, economic growth is a great deal to improve the living standard of people and to eradicate poverty.
Even though economic growth brought many benefits, it is argued by some that, it has a few drawbacks. Firstly, the increased number of cars will show no signs of decreasing pollution. Secondly, the effluents from large factories pollute the water bodies. Last but not least, the energy that we used to produce the products even cracks the ozone layer and gradually contributed for the global warming. if these types of issues not tackled, it will create a lot of health issues like asthma, respiratory diseases and so on.
After analysing both the views, I think that, economic progression is a great concept to overcome the poverty. Despite thinking about to stop economic growth, we should find some ways to cut the pollution and damage to the environment. For instance, using renewable energy source, proper waste management system and effective recycling methods can collaboratively solve this issues.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, poverty is still the biggest head ache in many countries. Hence, in spite of stopping economic developments, we should find effective solutions to eradicate the possible threats from economic growth to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2624671916 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87695172368 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9410002265 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290204330396 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844904920907 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856648666469 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170598221071 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944024035589 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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