Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the middle of globalization, the debate over economic growth has been dominated by two themes, stop or continue. stopped to save the environment or continued to reach prosperity alone is not a brilliant ideal. In my opinion, we should consider to give a right decision in front of this social issue.
On the one hand, economic growth has significantly improved our life’s quality, however, it is rapidly motivating the gap between the rich and the poor. A vast majority of people are manual workers, they are waged with a small salary, or even worse, only one dollar is earned per day in remote countries. Therefore, they have no ability to pay common devices, they are difficult to approach high-technology devices such as transportation, communication instruments. Furthermore, despite the fact that almost policies were declared to pave the way for poverty solution, however the poor is suffocated with the cloak of taxes - one of funds that burdening by the poor instead by the rich. taxes of entertainments, apartments to technological instruments point to users, indeed, the most burdened belongs the poor. economic growth is not put a lot of faith for the rich is richer and the poor become poorer.
On another hand, it is inevitable that economic growth contributes to pollute environment, however, our environment would not be able to recover by stopping economic development only. A numerous of solution is given to ease pollution such as decreasing leftovers, recycling plastic rubbish and using eco-friendly material instead. By contrast, population growth, low-quality education and poverty also occupying a large share of causing environmental degradation. Besides, other wrong actions are fueled by corruption of administrators like stealing precious woods, producing elixir of life from wildlife animals which cause imbalance in ecosystem. Unfortunately, we could recycle plastic materials but not save the rare wildlife and virgin forest, which only survive in documents.
In conclusion, economic growth plays an important role in global development but everything comes from many reasons and impacts on two sides of the same issue, and so does economic growth. continue or stop is not a main solution but how we could perform it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stopped
...inated by two themes, stop or continue. stopped to save the environment or continued to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Taxes
...dening by the poor instead by the rich. taxes of entertainments, apartments to techno...
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Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Economic
...ed, the most burdened belongs the poor. economic growth is not put a lot of faith for th...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Continue
...ame issue, and so does economic growth. continue or stop is not a main solution but how ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36516853933 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08538045221 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5959030414 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20730520401 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595466535437 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601010069772 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123398889979 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243197162314 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.