Some people say that Government should break down all the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that government have to destroy old building and changed them to a new building. Even though these can make become more modern, while if this is done it will make historical value from the country will be lost, and in my opinion, I disagree about this thing.
To embark on, in all of county sure have history how is the country can stand until now, and certainly, there is a history that still exists, such as building at the time. This heritage is very important and irreplaceable to make society understand about history of the place where the heroes struggle in the past when their fight for the country. For instance,
In Indonesia, building places can be used by many people to learn and it is raising awareness of issues like history, and as it can be seen, from this matter they do better in life.
How to avoid this? Developing country by eliminating historical evidence, of course, is the wrong choice. They should think that these locations are the one of place which can be used as a source of income. Since if this made as a tourist attraction would attract many visitors who are interested about the building. For example, Cordoba is one of the places with a history of Islamic civilization, Although Islam is no longer victorious there, some relics of its past can be seen. The Government of Spain made it a tourist location and did not change its original building, as a result, they got more income from visitors.
To conclude, I think that protecting and preserving many historical sites is very important to save knowledge about events which have happened in the past. because this will be a provision for the next generation and benefit for a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72390572391 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939747706 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2507171125 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128925954596 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434379593903 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044772672171 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722772494648 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406660840619 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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