Some people say the government should give healthcare the first priority, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers’ money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern age, the government faces the dilemma of whether to invest in healthcare as the leading priority or to spend taxes on other fields which appear to be more critical according to some individuals. In my personal view, I believe that spending money on healthcare would be the most beneficial option for society as a whole.
On the one hand, it is true that there are numerous vital sectors that the authorities need to invest in. The first worth-mentioning aspect perhaps would be education. Enhancing educational quality can increase literacy rates and the number of skilled workers and therefore, improve economic performance. In addition, the government should spend money on military since many conflicts among countries are happening in the world today. For example, in 2022, a war between Ukraine and Russia emerged and put the lives of innocent citizens in a great danger. Thus, we should always prepare our armies for the worst scenerios.
On the other hand, healthcare plays a undeniably crucial role in our community because without health, people would not be able to learn, work or even fight when needed. Health not only affects our physical strength but also our mental state and willpower. Therefore, if everybody is equipped with health services when needed, they can be able to study and work at their best. This will provide our country with more powerful labour force which aids economic development. Moreover, in terms of war, a strong healthcare system can help us take care of those who are injured in a short time. This assists our military immensely because during war, humans are the most important asset.
In conclusion, while some people advocate that the government should spend their budget on different areas, I would argue that healthcare is the most favourable field to invest in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... On the other hand, healthcare plays a undeniably crucial role in our communit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09634551495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62890430525 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4492078501 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195856638663 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558547507648 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674423992998 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135773982681 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823196234833 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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