Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down, while others believe that they should be preserved and restored instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether ancient buildings should be dismantled or maintained has been a contentious question for several decades. Some individuals feel that these are necessary because of their historical significance, while others argue that they are superfluous. They should be reinstated, in my opinion, because they are a valuable source of money and information. Nevertheless, I shall address both sides of the debate in depth in the following paragraphs.
For a number of reasons, modern builders favor the notion of replacing the previous structures. Contemporary buildings, in terms of effectiveness, not only save energy thanks to advanced materials and technologies, but they also permit many humans to stay in slightly elevated apartments, which might assist the real estate industry satisfy the rising demand for new inhabitants. The expensive expense of maintaining historic structures is also a significant consideration. If a government chooses to save a historic building in its current state, significant expenditures should be allocated to refurbish and solve difficulties caused by an old construction.
Nevertheless, detractors frequently emphasize the significance of ancient buildings in terms of cultural worth. Most of these structures, with their rich architecture and historical stories, may evoke a strong identification and nostalgia in observers; nonetheless, residents of metropolitan areas would not think the same thing about all towering emotion-free skyscrapers. Additionally, notwithstanding the expensive expense of restoration, these structures draw visitors from all over the world, resulting in a profitable strategy for local governments. Number of tourists, for instance, visit archeological buildings in cities such as Rome, London, and Istanbul, making identify environmental feasible for local governments.
After considering all sides of the issue, there is little question that contemporary buildings with the most up-to-date designs are necessary, but older structures must be preserved since they reflect our legacy and generate revenue for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00334448161 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41883242034 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655518394649 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1962297144 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192056396637 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06746988847 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680097467333 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121534718583 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873459969696 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.