Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People in the general public have different views about which subject should be prioritized. While some people may say that History is a top priority, I believe that people should value Science and Technology more than History.
Some people may argue that History is one of the most important school subjects which students should study hard because history can make it possible for human beings to achieve world peace. In history, humans repeated many tragedies such as conflicts between individuals and nations. People can learn a lot from history about how to deal with these problems in society, which will enable people to avoid making the same mistakes in the future. Japanese people learned a lot from the experience of World War II and has been making every effort to create a peaceful nation. If such efforts were made in all countries, there would be no wars in the world.
Nevertheless, I believe that Science and Technology classes are playing a more important role than History classes in our society. This is because these subjects can lead to economic success. These days, the demand for electric devices such as smartphones and computers is increasing significantly. This trend makes the science and technology industries more prosperous economically. According to Forbes, the top five companies which achieved the most exceptional financial success in the world were all companies related to information technology, including Google and Apple. Furthermore, science and technology can make our life more convenient. In recent years, the advancement of technology has been improving people’s standard of living significantly. Air conditioners allow people to live comfortably throughout the year, and they can enjoy fresh food thanks to refrigerators. Studying harder and developing new technologies will contribute to making people’s life more and more comfortable.
To sum up, although some may maintain that history is the most important subject, I insist that Science and Technology are of the most significant importance in the modern world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
People in the general public have different views about which subjec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39197530864 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87028906031 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2262534782 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403167936912 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122877819354 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100076883979 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27802823481 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428674061326 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
People in the general public have different views about which subjec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39197530864 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87028906031 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2262534782 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403167936912 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122877819354 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100076883979 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27802823481 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428674061326 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.