Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.other people think that, in todays world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
Discuss both these views and give your own information.
In this chaos world, with various attitudes about a matter, there are some people who would argue that art subjects are more crucial for shaping and developing of human communities, while others claim that it is hard to ignore the role and significance of science subjects in human life. To my mind, although science and technology change people's life revolutionary, history subjects are as vital as former ones. this essay will outline two fields of study and their importance.
On the one hand, enormous historical documents have shown that the most prosperous world's leaders and politicians were specialized in art-subjects such as philosophy, history and sociology. Subsequently, they were familiar with human beings needs in all walks of life, hence they would able to create civilized societies with great deal of successes in many dimensions. Moreover, if modern communities know comprehensively about not only their own past, but also history of other nations, they will push themselves down the right patch without repeating of our ancestors deficiencies which put them on the verge of destroying.
On the other side of the spectrum, there are many individuals who opine that science-subjects have changed our life dramatically which were out of the reach of people's comprehension fifty years ago. In addition, there are many compelling reasons in every aspect of daily life, reminding us that science's benefits outweigh art-subjects advantages. one of these reasons is that science is more practical and had brought about high levels of well being to humankind. By the way of an example, producing labour saving devices have declined repetitive household's chores marketably and lead to more enjoyable leisure times. Another salient example, which is hardly negligible, is the internet because comes earth's inhabitants further and further close.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, it is not fair that just appreciate science and technology, while playing down considerable roles. Since science ones help people so as to meet their physical and daily needs, whereas history help us to upgrade our spiritual needs and create more peaceful and ethical civilization with lease possible mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, as for, as to, in addition, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41428571429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.897273877 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631428571429 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2787226726 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.769230769 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242568815896 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797597954788 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687860476031 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142756617288 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503909628196 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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