Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in todays world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history
Discuss both the views and give your opinion
In this contemporary era, educations primary Purpose is preparing people to be useful citizens. Few individuals believe that historical events play a pivotal role in educational institutions. However, several humans view that the course of study such as scientific knowledge is an integral part of this modern world. In this essay, I will elaborate on both views and then explain why I opine that technical knowledge and historical events both are equally significant.
To commence with, some people argue that the benefits of former times have the main purpose in everyones life. The main reason for believing this is that by learning about the old days in the academic syllabus, they recognize the moral values, ethics, sculptures, and politics. Although, even youngsters obtain awareness about respect to others, as how to behave with the guardians. Moreover, it also plays a crucial part in a persons existence, since as one can learn a lot from the past and, it helps the undergraduate to grow into a good member of society. To illustrate, in many textbooks information related to past mistakes is mentioned, therefore it is not repeated in present. Thus, we cannot be denied the history syllabus in academic studies.
On the contrary, there are numerous reasons why we cannot live without science and technology subjects. First and foremost, a mechanical person is very beneficial in extreme conditions as they are easily repair anything such as cars, big companies machines and so on. Likewise, artificial machines not only work on difficult tasks but also do work in household old chores such as cleaning, mopping, and many more. Secondly, scientific technologies support juveniles to catch up details with the help of advanced improvement used in diverse fields including education, tourism, and commerce. As a result, students will tend to concentrate on these subjects to seek ideal jobs in the future.
In conclusion, while I believe that history is a significant subject, I do have faith in the important role of science and technology subject. lf people effectively connect both of them that can make them more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22608695652 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89032746564 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631884057971 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2794605027 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.058823529 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183462887529 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492187144994 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631572070576 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118995988995 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965365453571 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.