Zoos should be merely meant for entertainment or should there be some other purpose also?
Discuss and give your opinion
In this contemporary era, zoos play an immense role in the development of our country. However, many offspring visits wildlife parks for the education aim and even they enjoy for entertainment. In my perspective, zoos play a vital role in schooling, development, and for researchers. It
To commence with, visiting wildlife parks have a plethora of benefits. The main intend will elaborate on children knowledge related to animals as to how they living in the zoos and even what protection they get from caretakers such as food, shelter, water, and many things. Moreover, visiting zoos they can learn the importance of animals, as the role of an ecosystem through which they develop the level of understanding towards creatures. As well as, in many zoological gardens they have great facilities from time to time checking their health through doctors, so they get better treatment.
In addition, many people visiting wildlife parks on weekends with their children for entertainment purposes, because they want to explain to their offspring about zoos, so in the future they learn the importance of them. Furthermore, many scientists visiting zoological gardens for researching different sorts of animals breed, which leads to the development of our nation. To be more, animals get vaccines and medicines for the protection of their health. Therefore, zoos have the main purpose in our life.
In conclusion, Zoos have great potential to transform their role from a place for entertainment, education, research, development and safe home for animals. So, i think the government has to improve more facilities for wildlife creatures for the development of nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34980988593 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97369033654 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532319391635 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7390825344 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107491228794 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04907510591 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343970226306 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787503192029 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346919049877 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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