Should young children be encouraged to follow a strict aet of rules based on culture and traditions or should they be allowed to behave freely?
Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this modern era, youngsters have to live their life on their terms. Few humans believe that juveniles should follow the traditions of their nation, however, some persons view that they should have the right to make their own choice. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both arguments with relevant reasons.
To begin with, there are several reasons why adolescent has to follow the traditions of their culture. First and foremost, the old people think that if they involve in rituals, ethics, and customs, so at least they should know what’s going on in their tradition. For instance, as many festivals are significant for them like Diwali, Holi, Janmashtami, and many, even though in these all festivals they learn some moral values of life as to respect others and learn to worship god. Secondly, ancient traditions teach youths about how to bond with ancestors, because they lose all things due to their hectic life. Last not but least, many youngsters don’t know that they should have to wear clothes as per traditions because they are not too much attached to old traditions norms. Therefore, traditions could help young people to build their life more comfortably.
On the other hand, due to changes in globalization our world has become closer. Today because of this phenomenon people can select different parts of every culture. For example, in many companies like TIBEA in which japan traditions are followed by every worker, so this behavior is taken by many people around the world, although they learn new traditions of moral values and ethics. In addition to this, in some parts of the world traditions are wrong and it causes a lot of problems. Furthermore, in some parts of the world, a widow rule is there if the husband is dead then she is not involved in some traditions. Thus, in many circumstances, it is a wise decision that youth have the right to make their own choice even if their decisions are against traditions.
In a nutshell, it is believed that youngsters do not follow every tradition in terms of old ways as they follow all these traditions in their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87988826816 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54473566368 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527932960894 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3130904146 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160160310822 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566345367752 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514291467176 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1121188489 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03702958632 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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