Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Industrialisation is lucrative for the layman to improve the living standard, other believe that industrial growth cause pollution and cause an alarming effect on human and environment.so I will discuss both views and later I give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs
Firstly, Industries provided employment to masses, so they capable to buy bread and butter. however by this, people not only improve their lifestyle but also give proper education to their children. moreover, if more industries will set up then the productivity of materials increase by which that nation can export their items to other countries which directly enhance the financial level of the country and government provided all facilities to people which are essential for them
on the other hand, these entrepreneurs cause many environments problems such as air pollution and water pollution and so on .because factories are using the toxic material for various purposes and when these materials are burned dangerous gases are produced which mix with air and distract the upper layer of the atmosphere means ozone layer and this deplistion are harmful to human being. however, in clothes factories, the lot of water is used to dying the clothes and the water is not after the process will send out to the river and lakes which effect on an aquatic life because in water lot are mix up for coloring the garment
To conclude, the government should improve the infrastructure of factories which are helpful for reducing pollution and increase the productivity of material
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22489959839 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80720880654 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574297188755 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.512345303 49.4020404114 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.25 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.25 20.7667163134 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137959463983 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866739263105 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689432400619 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089251451542 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767158650125 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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