Some people say that it is impossible for a country to br both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent decades, environmental pollution has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although the idea of co-existence between prosperous economy and clean enviroment appears reasonable, I disagree with this view.
On the one hand, There are a multitude of reasons why a developed economy results in a harmful environment. First, a successful economy is invariably associated with a vast number of highly-industrial parks with manufacturing factories. That will feed into a higher degree of exhausted fumes, polluting the environment. Second, economically successful nations directly correlate with higher demand for urban sprawl with the installation of many road systems, thereby leading to widespread deforestation. That not only culminate in the deterioration of the environment but also the loss of animals’ habitat.
On the other hand, nations with affluent economy are not without environmental advantages. First, Citizens in these counties have higher awareness of environment preservation than those in other nations due to integration in formal schooling. In fact, some young individuals in countries like Canada, Sweden and The United States usually raise many tree-planting campaigns for environmental protection, contributing to the restoration of many damaged forests. Second, Developed countries’ strong financial muscles could be conductive to many capital investment activities in projects developing advanced green technologies. For example,In some European states, the application of solar and nuclear power for electricity production has remarkably reduce the dependency on coal consumption, which acts as a deterrent for the accumulation of small particles in the atmosphere.
In conclusion, I believe that polluted environment is a inevitable product of nations with prosperous economy. However, the governments worldwide should corporate and sign the enviroment agreements to tackle these green issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03484320557 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40932531917 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7155963119 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140388701631 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413447387256 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299663859336 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685759358109 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502389696711 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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