Some People say the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Few people opine that, extinction of some flora and fauna brings many major hurdles related to nature. While others maintain that, rather than this there are plethora of issues that need to be addressed. This essay would be discussed both the aspects of environmental problem before making any decision.
Firstly, several plants and animals have been vanishing nowadays. It consists some important living creatures too. Lack of amount in species tend to affecting natural cycle. Secondly, this extinction has been damaging ecosystem in order to other make harm other animals. The nature is a place where every living thing is dependent on another one for food and shelter. Moreover, this concern need to be considered as ultimately human beings would also be affected through these environmental changes.
On the other hand, some people may claim that booming trend of cutting trees should be mentioned as primary issue in every nation. People are focused towards their daily work routine. Whereas, some authorities are converting forest land into highways. Furthermore, this change in nature brings several climate related problems such as global warming and uncertainty in rain fall. The impact on nature is directly connected with agricultural developments.
Hammering the last nail, it can be said that "To each his own". However, in my perspective environment and the chances that occurred in it, should be considered as a concern. Although, every plant and animal is quite important factor in nature but, unnecessary demolishing trees in the name of development is a major problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...used towards their daily work routine. Whereas, some authorities are converting forest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70262276614 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670634920635 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7033778793 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178130304611 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518196407655 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416927281439 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105789032916 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013852110587 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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