A wide range of environmental problems with varying severity exist today. Some may argue that the extinctions of particular species of plants and animals are the major one while others say that there are more important problems to consider. In this essay i will ponder upon both of these views and provide my opinion in the end.
On one hand, there are people who argues that the loss of particular specie are a the main problem in current era. This is true to an extend. The acts of several plants and animals helps the nature to remain balanced and help reduce problems like global warming and climate change. For example the part bees plays in out ecosystem by helping plants in reproduction is undeniable, and their total loss may cause immeasurable catastrophe. Governments have already established several wild life projects to protect animals and some plants from further extinction and loss.
On the other hand, People who claim that there are big problems other than the loss of some plants and animals are not wrong either. The current increase in global warming and climate change are severe and need to be fixed. Experts believe that the earth's population is estimated to be increased by 3 billion in the next 20 years thus resulting in the lack of resources which may later turn in to poverty and other disasters. Problems like these surely threaten our existence as a whole.
In conclusion, the problems of our era are of wide range which may affect our livelihood on the planet. Personally i believe that the the problems like global warming, climate change and poverty are to be considered as a greater threat that the extinction of particular species of plants and animals. These loss of animals and plants can be controlled by ensuring their safety and protection some of which already exist, unlike the other major severe problems which is perceived to be out of control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8173374613 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47551051048 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482972136223 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 323.0 20.2975951904 1591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1556.0 106.682146367 1459% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 323.0 20.7667163134 1555% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 71.0 7.06120827912 1005% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376986849871 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.376986849871 0.084324248473 447% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245287444343 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871660886915 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.8 13.0946893788 1243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -247.91 50.2224549098 -494% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.98 8.58950901804 268% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.2 10.1190380762 1297% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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