Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others said that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The today's world is facing so much adverse problems in terms of environment. While some people would argue that the most serious problem of our time is species loss such as plants and animals, others believe there are still more bigger issues that cause detrimental effects to our lives. Personally, I would say though some plants and animals are in that dangered of being extinct, global warming and climate change are the two major problems that deserve our attention.
It is clearly evident that the loss of individual species now is becoming rampant. This could be explained by the pervasiveness of deforestation that lead to the loss of habitats of those plants and animals. However, the main reasons for this are due to global warming and climate change, the two issues that I mentioned.
In particular, since the amount of toxic substances emitted from the vehicles, the factories is continuously rising with crazy speed, it is inevitable that the earth has to experience the greenhouse effect and becomes hotter. This results in the rising of sea level which immerge the habitat of species and lead to the death of them. Moreover, the global warming also lead to the changes in climate, as nowadays it seems to be impossible for people to predict precisely the weather and climate. For example, weather can change suddenly from sunny to rainy without any signs and that brings to people's lives so much inconvenience. You can plan for a picnic with your family in the sunny weather and few second later, everything has to be canceled with disappointment because of the rain. More seriously, axit rain results from climate change can kill the habitat as well as the species, lead to an unhealthy biological diversity.
In a nutshell though the loss of species is hazardous, global warming is the route of all the problems and deserves people's attention. Therefore, deal with the global warming and we can deal with all others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...animals, others believe there are still more bigger issues that cause detrimental effects t...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ny without any signs and that brings to peoples lives so much inconvenience. You can pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61186907453 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2277682448 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226315053922 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739718573525 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777959258655 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142838449129 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121948585025 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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