Human beings are now facing serious environmental issues. Some say that this occurs due to the deficiency of particular fauna and flora. Others argue that those are not the only causes of contamination. In my point of view, natural problems are being happened by a variety of causes, not only the disappear of natural species.
To begin with, plants and animals have an undeniable role in human life. Conservating the number of these species not only preserves the biodiversity but also guarantees the qualify of the living habitat. Therefore, plants provide beautiful scenery and indispensable factors to maintain human health. For example, trees give us oxygens and reduce carbonates so we can breathe. Animals play a significant role which can be seen in nutrients in their meat, their contributions to scientific research, etc.
Although that species contribution is dramatically needed with the environment, their deficiency is not the only factor that causes environmental problems. On the other hand, natural destruction is being seen caused mostly by human affection. With the rise of industrialization revolution, human is using more and more natural materials and polluting the environment by wasting sewages into the air, water, etc. For instance, Vietnam recently witnessed the death of thousands of fish in the Mekong delta area which was caused by wastes from a nearby manufactory. The drawbacks are significantly serious and the company had to pay enormous compensation.
In conclusion, the lack of important natural species influences the environment but that is not the main cause of the problem. Human manufacturing activities are the most significant cause of this issue, indubitably.
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Some people believe that governments are responsible for the increase in obesity in children while others think it is the fault of the parents Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement 77
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots why do you think it is happening Is it negative or positive development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ppened by a variety of causes, not only the disappear of natural species. To begin ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only the disappear of natural species. To begin with, plants and animals have a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...es the biodiversity but also guarantees the qualify of the living habitat. Therefore, plant...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ributions to scientific research, etc. Although that species contribution is dr...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany had to pay enormous compensation. In conclusion, the lack of important nat...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44905660377 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11569711778 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5125326371 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181436673585 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541598097912 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478693166565 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108260590856 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344296248955 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.