Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people claim that in these days the significant problem of planet’s nature is losing some kinds of plants and animals. Although, others think that there are more other important problems in our life.
This essay will discuss the given two point of views and my personal opinion about provided issue.
Firstly, there are a lot of considerable reasons of decreasing animals’ and plants’ number. One of them is that year by year atmosphere is becoming worse and worse, and because of this problem, a big amount of living creatures have considerable decreasing. For example, in every city there are enough gas factories which spoil the environment. Moreover, on the street it could be seen a large number of different gas cars, and this is one of the main reasons too.
Second reason is that due to using animals for different testing for humans’ benefits, year after year majority of animals suffer from the torment of experiments. For instance, people use them for the testing new types of cosmetics to find out allergic signs or other bad irritations.
In addition, because of all these testing suffer over 200 000 animals which leads to dieing and declining of their quantity.
From the opinions’ of some people, nowadays there are other serious problems than provided before. Not only animals and plants have important extinction problems, but our citizens also have enough. Such as decreasing of people’s population year by year. Humanity have a lot of diseases from the same gas machines and works. As an example, lung cancer, heart disease, death, and other chronic diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...osing some kinds of plants and animals. Although, others think that there are more other...
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Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...uss the given two point of views and my personal opinion about provided issue. Firstly, there...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...oreover, on the street it could be seen a large number of different gas cars, and this is one of ...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...pos;s population year by year. Humanity have a lot of diseases from the same gas mac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19771863118 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76046674835 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3856691368 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184673894109 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630922685647 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607417003568 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966666089203 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835192531544 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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