Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that environment is coping with many serious problems. While some people believe that the biggest issue of environmental problem is many plants and animals are danger of losing, I would argue that there are more vital problems affect the environment.
There are some powerful reasons can explain why the decline of some plants and animals is the most important environmental problem. Firstly, plants and animals play a vital role to contribute the balance of ecosystem. In other words, some kind of plants and animals are sources of food of other species, hence if they decrease or are danger of extinction, it will be threated to the survival of many species. Secondly, plants is sources of oxygen, the thing helps people and other animals can breath and survive. Moreover, plant attributes to prevent the erosion and reduce the negative Therefore, if the number of plants are decreased will make people face with many disasters. For example, in Vietnam, many plants are cut down lead to people are faced more serious impact of flood such as lose houses and even their relatives.
I agree with those whose argue that many issues of environment are more crucial. People's health are threatened by the increase in air pollution. In fact, the percentage of people have problem with their lungs are sharply increasing and even many of them are facing with dangerous disease like cancer. Therefore, air pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems because it threats to the survive of people and reduce the average life expectancy and even have negative impact to the child in the future. Many people in many countries become poor people because they lose verything in the storms, flood or earthquake. These disasters are happen due to the climate change. This is the most serious problem because it will destroy the life of many people. Morover, it also effect to the economic status of a nations because the government must spend money to recover their country after the consqunces of diaster.
In conclusion, although the losing of many plants and animals are the important environmental problem should be considered, it seems to me that other issues such as air pollution of disaster are more dangerous and threate to the live of people and economic of the nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...hing helps people and other animals can breath and survive. Moreover, plant attributes...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...onmental problems because it threats to the survive of people and reduce the average life e...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...lood or earthquake. These disasters are happen due to the climate change. This is the ...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
...e life of many people. Morover, it also effect to the economic status of a nations bec...
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Line 3, column 816, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...t also effect to the economic status of a nations because the government must spend money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98955613577 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56087192611 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469973890339 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6845224035 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.411764706 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255601642306 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908932209487 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839730635613 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197078494333 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514426289696 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.