Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmentsl problems. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Environmental problems are notable concerns in the world today. Some people say the main cause to those problem is the disappearance of specific plant and animals species, while others believe more important evironmental problems exist.
The existence of plants and creatures established the environment. They create various natural habitats and wonders. Without plants, phenomenons and disasters are likely to occur. As a result, facilities and utilities are wiped away and it takes a long time to repair and rebuilt. Take the big wildfire in Australia in previous years for example. The reasons for this tragedy to happen are because of the carelessness of the government and the unbearable heat that stemmed from the lack of trees. In addition, oxygen can hardly be generated in the absence of plants. Primarily, oxygen is the main source of life as humanity and other societies of creatures need it to survive. If humanity and other animals species extinct, the beauty and livelihood of Earth will no longer exist.
However, there are other significant aspects that cause environmental problems as well, such as pollution and climate change. Many types of pollution including air pollution and water pollution had been detrimental problems. They affect the atmosphere and put the health and life of creatures at risk. Climate change also contributes to the damage on Earth as well as the destruction of natural habitats. Subsequently, all of these problems deter the quality of life and living standards on this planet.
From my point of view, every environmental problem has a great effect on the existence of the Earth. But it can not be denied that the loss of plants and animals species left the most damage. I believe it would be advisable to take more consideration into solving this along with other environmental problems.
To sum up, environmental problems should not be overlooked, especially the disappearance of creatures. Rapid actions must be taken to prevent the horrible effects of these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...oday. Some people say the main cause to those problem is the disappearance of specific plant ...
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Line 2, column 701, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...ed it to survive. If humanity and other animals species extinct, the beauty and livelih...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90533595049 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2573226681 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276853310356 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678138467049 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886758706845 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163230392668 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127519902159 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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